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+ Scratching the Surface +
Pain and memory
one in the same
times so horrible,
cannot even be spoken of...
things so terrible,
why must we be tortured?
Sadness and rejection
one in the same
its an infatuation,
emotions with no name...
its a saturation,
of my weaker feelings...
Love and promise
one thing you said to me
forever we'd be
nothing but a lie,
now I know...
together we'd be
I just want to die,
where did you go?
Meaningless and me
one and the same
I don't know
what to say to you
I don't know
what I should do,
just like you...
I used to have a purpose
but thats just,
scratching the surface.
Pain and memory
one in the same
times so horrible,
cannot even be spoken of...
things so terrible,
why must we be tortured?
Sadness and rejection
one in the same
its an infatuation,
emotions with no name...
its a saturation,
of my weaker feelings...
Love and promise
one thing you said to me
forever we'd be
nothing but a lie,
now I know...
together we'd be
I just want to die,
where did you go?
Meaningless and me
one and the same
I don't know
what to say to you
I don't know
what I should do,
just like you...
I used to have a purpose
but thats just,
scratching the surface.
Again...
I make no sense what so ever...
I think I'm losing it? ... A paradox in my creativity, my words aren't so flowing..
*sighs depressingly*
tell me what you think. .. please. don't be too harsh. i'm fragile.
I make no sense what so ever...
I think I'm losing it? ... A paradox in my creativity, my words aren't so flowing..
*sighs depressingly*
tell me what you think. .. please. don't be too harsh. i'm fragile.
© 2002 - 2024 aristocrat
Comments6
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If i had'nt read your description, i wouldnt have known anything amiss in this. I still dont.
You might be sufferring presently from a slight variation of the ubiquitous 'writers block', but have faith and things will move on.
To me this poem symbolises unusual style and form. Yes, you might say that it's trite or things. But no, its a good poem when i see the passions and emotions and heartbreak running through it.
Nice poem i would prefer to say because it touches me deep within.
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i love Jesus Christ with all my heart.
You might be sufferring presently from a slight variation of the ubiquitous 'writers block', but have faith and things will move on.
To me this poem symbolises unusual style and form. Yes, you might say that it's trite or things. But no, its a good poem when i see the passions and emotions and heartbreak running through it.
Nice poem i would prefer to say because it touches me deep within.
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i love Jesus Christ with all my heart.